jblum (jblum) wrote,
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Mediasphere rewrites

For those following along from previous Mediasphere updates: the tongue-tangle caused by having characters named Vila, Vargo, and Vidge has been resolved; Vargo is now named Garov. (The joys of Terry Nation names, they work in almost any order.) Sadly this means sacrificing the joke Peter Anghelides pointed me to, but the overall read is better for it.

And that lengthy Vila babble in Ch 2 which I wasn't sure whether it was brilliant characterization or a huge self-indulgent mess? Is now about 25% shorter, and much farther away from the self-indulgent end for it...
Tags: blakes 7, mediasphere
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